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pressure from college...pressure from work... i'm sorry ...xxx
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

At first glance, this may seem like a typical cliche emo poem. However, this one is quite different. This is a very haunting and very visceral piece. It is a very detailed account of the innermost thought processes that pervade a person still feeling the pain of past wounds. The imagery is crisp and very graphic and the impact is quite strong. One can't help but feel depressed and, I'm sure the author would agree, that was a main focal point. Also another gem in this piece is the flexibility for multiple interpretations. However, I will leave that to the reader. Aside from a few editorial concerns, this is a great read.